21-08-2014, 05:19 PM
Phil,
Nice... I would suggest the first "acceptable" in 3 is superfluous and it scans correctly without it, and in 2, it should be "or", not "nor". Good work!
Cheers
Jim
Nice... I would suggest the first "acceptable" in 3 is superfluous and it scans correctly without it, and in 2, it should be "or", not "nor". Good work!
Cheers
Jim